"Why am I doing this?" Rama asked himself. "Sita is ridiculous, she is demanding, she is always whining about wanting something new, for once I should not hand her what she desires at the flick of her finger."
Rama pulled an arrow from his quiver, pulled back, and fired. His arrow, however, did not hit the golden deer. Thus, the deer was frightened and ran away. Rama scurried to attempt another shot at the deer, but soon realized that he had only brought one arrow because of his pride in his shooting ability. So, Rama sulked back to the cottage, ashamed of his miss, but also secretly happy that Sita would be denied her desires.
Upon his return to the cottage, Rama was utterly dumbfounded. Instead of his wife waiting for him to reappear, he found and empty home. Sita had been abducted, and it was his duty to reclaim her. After speaking to others in the forest, Rama found out that Ravana had been the perpetrator. Ravana was an evil rakshasa, who had been utterly infatuated with Sita upon hearing who she was. Ravana had convinced one of his friends to pose in the form of a golden deer, in order to distract Rama. When the deer claimed Rama's attention, Ravana swooped in to abduct Sita. Although Sita screamed, Rama was so far into the forest chasing the deer that he could not hear her. Thus, Rama set out into the forest with his quiver, bow, and arrows, to reclaim his wife by force.
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| Ravana approaching Sita. Source: Myths and Mythology |
Author's note: I chose to rewrite this story because of the questions that it evoked from me while reading it. I noticed Rama's inability to say "no" to his wife, and wanted to give a different twist on the story, where Rama is annoyed by his wife, rather than blindly endearing. This story comes from Narayan, R. K. (1972) The Ramayana.

Wow, haha quite the story there. I did not expect the part of Rama being annoyed by his wife, you kind of related it to a typical relationship there. I wish you could finish the story of how he got his wife back. You ended it with him being on a quest to fetch his wife back, but if Rama is that annoyed with his wife, why does he want her back? Haha well overall the story was pretty intriguing and I thought the picture you posted was kind of unique. Great job.
ReplyDeleteHey Christine! I ended the story that way because I didn't want to deviate very far from the original, so it still falls back into the overall storyline. And, I ran out of time to finish the story. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you changed the story to incorporate Rama being annoyed with Sita rather than just blindly doing as she wants. It makes the relationship seem more real and more modern. Overall, I thought the writing was great and clear. I enjoyed the picture as well. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYou know when I was reading the book I was wondering to myself why Sita wanted this deer so badly and was making Rama go fetch it for her. I really liked your story because of how you made Rama seem so annoyed by Sita’s weird requests. I like the picture that you posted with your story, it’s very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteHey Dakota,
ReplyDeleteI like the new outlook on this story. I actually really enjoyed that you showed Rama being annoyed with Sita—rightly so in my opinion! But I especially liked that he still ran off to save her without hesitation. It seems like a good lesson in love to me. Sita was being annoying and she gets her way a lot because Rama caves to her desires; he still loves her and wants to have her by his side! Great story!